Friday, June 18, 2010

Friday Flash 55 entitled "Rabbit's Big Win"

He lays on his side and sleeps.
A furry, honey-colored body pillow,
Long, soft, and warm with
Rapid diaphragmatic breathing.
His hind leg begins to twitch --slowly,
A little faster,
He’s off
Full speed ahead!
A defeated whimper escapes like a air bubble popping at the water‘s surface.
You’ll get that rabbit next time, Boy!

Friday Flash 55 is hosted by G-Man


  1. I'm glad that the rabbit got away. But the old dog gave it a good chase.

  2. i loved this, marie! your writing is exciting, even if your 55 ended up poorly for your dog! very fine work, my friend!


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